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Post by Tracker89 on Jan 20, 2007 2:49:35 GMT -5
Very good...just as I imagined it, if not better. Finally Cam gets a role in the main storyline, however tiny it is. BTW, I find it a funny coincidence that the real-life Dakar is going to end tommorow, although I don't see any dark green Land Rovers in the standings.  |
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Post by ebonyviper on Jan 20, 2007 3:08:39 GMT -5
That took a lot of thought to be able to fit him in there. Good thing I have a very creative and active imagination. ;D
And I just discovered that the Dakar's being broadcast on a local channel of mine at a time that is agreeable to me.
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Post by Orca on Jan 20, 2007 10:32:13 GMT -5
This story gets more and more interesting with every chapter. Lots of interesting dynamics as far as individuals go. Can't wait for the next one! ^_^
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Post by materthegreat on Jan 20, 2007 15:11:36 GMT -5
Wow! EbonyViper you have done the best dang Cars fanfic I have EVER read, I ain't just saying that! I really can't for more!
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Post by ebonyviper on Jan 20, 2007 17:41:51 GMT -5
Thank you! ;D
I really work hard at giving my chapters substance and a lot of character development.
And hey, ever wonder what it's like for a car to go through labor? That might be in the next chapter.
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Post by Insane Pirate Dragon on Jan 20, 2007 22:00:50 GMT -5
I can't help but I need to say it once, "Aaaawwwww". I loved this chapter. And I can't help but wonder about that question myself, who's it gonna be or are ya going to make us wait till the next chapter.
And are you going to bring Sapphire and Amber into the fic yet?
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Post by ebonyviper on Jan 20, 2007 22:08:29 GMT -5
Hmmm... gotta wait until I write the next chapter. And I might bring in Sapphire and Amber...
On another note, I'm wondering who's characters are all still in Radiator Springs. I know that Zed's characters are there because of Slaytor. So's Insane's and Kamui's. And there's Orca's. As well as mine. Did I forget anyone?
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Post by Kamui.EXE on Jan 20, 2007 22:23:41 GMT -5
Fierano's characters. ^^;
~Kamui.EXE
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Post by Insane Pirate Dragon on Jan 20, 2007 22:28:12 GMT -5
Well Phoenix would have her headquarters near Radiator Springs since her sponsor is Ramone, so Neil and Jet would still be around, though Jet might finally be feeling his age, he is a '48 after all.
And with RS's growing population Kitt might have started up his own firm in town so he could be closer to Sapphire, he'd would have finally grown tired of big city life like the rest of his ragtag family.
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Post by ebonyviper on Jan 20, 2007 22:38:25 GMT -5
I don't know if any of Fierano's characters would be in Radiator Springs. I mean, I don't know if Glimmer would still be racing after five years and I have no clue what Carl might be doing. It would have to up to Fierano himself to decide whether his characters should be in town or not.
Sapphire's headquarters was originally going to be the HQ that once belonged to her father, but she might decide to establish her own HQ in town, like exert her independence. That would make, like 4 racecars in Radiator Springs. O.o
Amber and General Lee might come up to visit from Hazzard County, since she's living there now. But, as I said, there may be someone who's going to go into labor... I'm not hinting at who it is, so everybody will have to wait until the next chapter is written.
I think that some of Evangeline's characters would still be in Radiator Springs still. And since I already featured Darcy in the first few chapters, I think I can feature some of her other characters now.
So there are many possibilities here.
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Post by Insane Pirate Dragon on Jan 20, 2007 22:43:41 GMT -5
Well maybe they can form a team. In Nascar some teams have more than one driver for them so maybe they formed a team or something.
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Post by ebonyviper on Jan 20, 2007 22:47:39 GMT -5
They're sponsors may come to some form of agreement. Let's see. Those sponsors are:
Rust-Eze
Flo & Go Diner
Ramone's House of Body Art
ClearShield
Would these sponsor be able to tolerate each other?
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Post by Insane Pirate Dragon on Jan 20, 2007 22:53:38 GMT -5
Rust-Eze and Ramone's probably would tolerate each other, but I don't know anything about the other two, but they could come to an agreement probably.
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Post by ebonyviper on Jan 21, 2007 0:12:06 GMT -5
Well, Sapphire and Kamui barely tolerate each other, so it would be a little difficult. Maybe they come a mutual agreement or something.
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Post by Insane Pirate Dragon on Jan 21, 2007 0:37:52 GMT -5
Maybe Phoenix or Lightning could of helped it along, or maybe something happened to Kamui and Sapphire and the settle their differences, somewhat.
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