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Post by Kayota on Dec 6, 2006 18:49:38 GMT -5
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Post by Kamui.EXE on Dec 6, 2006 19:06:20 GMT -5
Okay... I did say quirky, but you may wanna tone it down a touch. The boyfriend part might be a little over the top. The thing with quirks is that they have to strangly make sense no matter how far apart they are and tie them together with a common thread and make them work. You can still be outrageous, but you also have to make a bit of sense. You have a good start, but what helps is if you built up a biography for her to tie everything together.
~Kamui.EXE
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Post by Kayota on Dec 6, 2006 19:11:43 GMT -5
Yeah, I wasn't sure about the last part either. I got rid of it. I'm going to give her a biography, I just wanted to make sure it sounded alright before I started. :\
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Post by Kamui.EXE on Dec 6, 2006 19:13:56 GMT -5
Alright. Write up a biography and try and tie them together and we'll take it from there.
~Kamui.EXE
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Post by Kayota on Dec 6, 2006 19:16:37 GMT -5
Sure thing, just started. =3 Hang on and I'll have it done in no time.
Man, it's been ages since I've had a character who's this mental. Not since Tazar, the feather-paranoid, who has since then mellowed out.
...he used to stab holes in Murdoc Niccals's Winnebago roof. Ahyup.
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Post by Kayota on Dec 6, 2006 19:42:26 GMT -5
Finished, Pm'ed it. Too nervous to post it yet. ^^'
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Post by Kayota on Dec 6, 2006 20:03:55 GMT -5
Last update: Kamui.EXE says that she'll work out in the RP if I try not to be shy or anything and so I'll be intruducing her right after the current plot. =3 xxxAxel out!
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