Post by fierano on Dec 7, 2007 12:17:57 GMT -5
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The following is a work of fanfiction inspired and based upon A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens using characters and events from the Cars movie by Disney and Pixar. Carl Magnus is a Cars-style character based off the BMW M3 GTR from EA's Need For Speed Series. Character concepts otherwise are based off their respective creators.
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...in Crime News tonight, a Chrysmas gift for justice today as the body of one of the West Coast's most notorious street racers was recovered from the bottom of the Carbon Canyons today, confirming the crushing end of his reign of terror.
Carl Magnus, who went by the street name Mag Three, was reported to have fallen off the Canyons after he was spun out and crashed through a safety barrier at the edge of the road during a high-speed police chase some nights ago. His body was identified through police records and tire track ballistics. Several Palmont police cruisers were also injured during the perilous chase through narrow canyon roads, but Magnus was the only one reported to have fallen off the cliffs.
A press conference is expected soon.
"Mr. McFierson?"
The red Pontiac Fiero quickly switched off the TV he was watching and quickly aligned to attention inside the pit garage, almost dislodging his yellow-and-black team cap. He didn't seem to mind that he was the only one in that cold garage that night on the speedway, apart from his team's star racer.
Jens Glimmer had already won the Piston Cup for the previous season, beating an array of competition that included "shooters" (cars mixed of so many makes that it was hard to tell exactly what they were), established Piston Cup figures and even other foreigners. This German racer was also particularly known for an ice-cold demeanor which made the rest of the room seem like a warm spring, and this Chrysmas Eve, he was no warmer than he usually was.
"Have you finished processing the data, McFierson?"
"Y-yes, sir. I've already sent it out and the evaluation should come back ASAP."
"Good. I'd like you here at 0600 to have my settings prepared."
"Sir...I was about to ask you something on that..."
"Well, spit it out then. Time wasted means victory made more elusive."
"I was wondering if I could have the day off."
The question hit Glimmer like a slippery fish.
"Excuse me?"
"If it's okay with you...and your managers."
For the past few years, Glimmer had been managed by a group literally referred to as the Managers. He knew little of their inner workings, especially since he was satisfied with their assistance in helping him win. It was assistance that got him four DTM championships before "exporting" himself to America to truly go international.
"Fahrvergnugen. I don't understand why people take as much as weekends off, especially racing teams. No, you cannot have the day off."
"Sir, it's Chrysmas!"
"I understand your family situation is serious, but your next vacation is not until New Year's Day."
"Just one day off. I'll work overtime as much as it takes to make up for it!"
It was then that Glimmer's in-car phone rang. He gestured for Rafey to silence himself (an order the Fiero followed like a puppy) as he took the call from his Managers. Rafey watched as his anger turned slowly to a slight sense of shock.
"Yes...ugh...all right then." Glimmer shut off the receiver before turning to Rafey.
"All right," he began with an exasperated sigh. "You can go spend Chrysmas with your family. I'll book the ticket for the next flight out. But I expect to see you back here early on the 26th."
"Only a day visit?"
"You were expecting a week? Now get to the airport before I change my mind."
"Y-y-yes sir. Merry Chrysmas."
Glimmer snapped a quick "Fahrvergnugen!" as Rafey left, leaving the cold Mercedes-Benz Piston Cup racer under cold fluorescent light in an even colder garage. He looked out at the track, which was only lit because he was present. His driver had already left for Chrysmas Vacation, leaving him to drive slowly out of the garage and out onto city streets. Glimmer's pacing was slow as he was still wearing his racing treads, and he'd have to do so all the way back to the hotel he was booked at.
Evening was settling on the city, and the hustle and bustle was evident. Cars shuffling to and fro on their lanes to get back to their garages of residence for Chrysmas Eve dinners and parties with family and friends. Were it not for the straight fascia and lack of such plans, Glimmer would have appeared to be just another one of the crowd.
The only real standout for a few blocks, it seemed, was the Salvation Army APC that caught his attention at the front door of the hotel.
"Salvation Army, sir..."
"I can see that, isn't hard for anyone to see that badge on your bulk."
"Sorry, I'm a bit clumsy sometimes..." the APC said as it slowly turned to face the clearly-smaller Mercedes-Benz. "Anyway..." he cleared his throat, as if he had a hard time memorizing what he was going to read, "There are thousands of cars in this city who need garages and anti-freeze this Chrysmas, and we need-"
Glimmer felt the need to interject.
"Don't you already have several installations in this city alone for that?"
"Well yeah...but to be honest, they're barely managing to feed them. Times have been hard with the economy, so we're also asking for donations.
"Well, I already have to donate quite a bit of my earnings to several charities as my contract dictates. Better there than jail...which is where a lot of them will end up anyway."
"Most cars would rather die than go to the country impound!"
The mention of death caused Glimmer to glare...something he only reserved for competition. "Then perhaps they ought to die. Every make has its lemons and surplus manufacture. You have a good evening."
The APC simply rolled back aghast at Glimmer's words, as Glimmer entered the hotel. It was a posh, 5-star place where he'd made reservations weeks in advance, but he had little need for any more than a standard garage there. The only reason he'd checked in there was becuase he had a reputation to keep up.
"Room 616, Mister Glimmer," the concierge replied before sliding Glimmer's keycard over to him. "Merry Christmas!" he added as Glimmer went into the elevator...before the Benz once again retorted, "Fahrvergnugen!"
There was something off about the door to his room that particularly startled him. Instead of the usual number in faux-metal ornaments, there was a BMW badge dripping with oil, as if it were welded onto someone and then ripped right off. In fact, the logo also appeared to have some of that sheet metal surrounding it too when it was ripped off.
Glimmer gasped and shook his frontside, only to find the normal number where the logo was. He quickly looked to either side down the hall to see if anyone had caught him...but it was quiet.
"I suppose all this practice is finally getting to me," he shrugged. "I'm not a robot."
He entered the room and set the key in the power slot before locking the door firmly shut beside him and heading into the bathroom for a quick wash and a change of tires. The drive here had left him filthy, by his standards. He switched on the shower...
...only to be doused by used oil. Glimmer reflexively squinted and gagged, trying to purge the oil from his mouth...but when he opened his eyes, it turned out to be just the cold shower water.
"What the heck is happening to me!?" he shouted, before taking a few deep breaths. "It's okay...just calm down. I must not be used to not practicing...that's all."
He finished his shower quickly and dried off before heading back to the bedroom, where he noticed a complimentary bottle of Valvoline on the minibar. He blinked and shook his frontside again, just in case a poison bottle replaced it. Thankfully, it didn't...and Glimmer slowly took it and took a quick swig. He forced it to go down into his system...Valvoline just didn't have that tang that he enjoyed from Mobil...before he put it back on the bar and turned off the light.
As soon as darkness engulfed him...
"Hello Jens...do you remember me?" came a haunting rasp from behind him.
Glimmer did a double-take, and at that moment wished he hadn't, otherwise his breath would not have suddenly left him.
A BMW M3 GTR had manifested in his hotel room, as ghastly white as a zombie. Or at least whatever wasn't covered with oil or showed exposed sheet metal or any of the other fragments of street fixtures sticking out of his body. The moonlight coming through the window seemed to emphasize the disfigurements all the more.
"Oh God...who are you?" It wasn't particularly surprising that the ice-cold Benz was still more cold than fearful.
"Glimmer...remember me?"
"I don't. This American Valvoline must've gone stale already."
"Why don't you ask me then?"
"All right then, who are you?"
"I was there when your life changed forever...in Hockenheim."
The Mercedes raised an eye-visor. "Hockenheim? That was more than a decade ago!"
"I was in the back of the pack that ran you into that barrier. And you might have heard of me on the news."
Glimmer flinched at the memory, but only briefly.
"Well then, Mr. Magnus, living well is the best revenge...and by the looks of you, it's revenge well wrought."
It was then that Carl groaned...or rather, roared...in a manner that his bumper seemed to fall right off. The BMW then bobbed his frontside to re-attach it.
"That's right, you suffer for what you did to me."
"But do you know what happened to me after I saw you crash, Jens?" Carl moaned. "I'd always wanted to race in the streets. Not caring for anyone but my closest crew-mates. And not really caring about them except for when I needed parts. My parents groomed me to be a legit touring car...and when I saw you crash I figured the legit circuit was no less harsh than the streets. How wrong I was."
"You had only watched a little loser get run out of the game of survival of the fittest...or at least for a while. Perhaps if you had persevered, I might have raced you in the DTM. What a rival you would have been...so many fans, so much bounty to divide-"
Carl roared out in pain again at the word "bounty", causing the entire room to rumble...and his bumper to fall off yet again.
"Bounty...awards, trophies, fans...is that all you care about!?"
"You sound as if you regret it."
"Regret? I've run dozens of cops and regular traffic cars off of the road...buried them in obstacles, mutilated them at roadblocks...but I never looked back. Not because I was being chased, but because I never cared to wonder what would happen to their families. The suffering they had to go through as I maimed or even killed their relatives."
"Leave them behind, Carl. They lost in your great race of life. Perhaps you're in this state simply because of the unfortunate manner of your demise..."
"And do you know what YOUR true state is really like, Jens? Do you really want to wait until you die to know?"
"I think I have a good idea already. You really mustn't be so pessimistic."
Another roar, and yet it seemed Glimmer hadn't quite gotten used to it. On the contrary, his demeanor seemed to have melted, and he moved in close to try to console the Bimmer.
"When you're finished doing what you do in life, you will never have a reason to see hope. You think you'll pass on in your prim and proper racer's form...but you've never seen your true inner self. My living form perished with me at the bottom of that canyon...but yours is still alive. You left it in the now-abandoned stretches at Hockenheim, mangled and rusting, whimpering, just begging to die."
"But I'm not dead...I'm living right now! I can show you how I feel pain if you want!"
"No...earthly pain no longer concerns me. I'll be feeling this pain for all eternity, burdened by the memories of those that choose not to forgive me...but your burden...is already worse than mine."
" But you died a winner at something, Carl."
"Winning? Is that all you ever think about? That's all I ever thought about...and look where I ended up..."
"Enemies come and go, but winners' legacies remain!" Glimmer pleaded, the anger slowly draining from his voice like an oil change.
"Yours won't remain when you pass on...you will be forgotten just like me...you will be replaced if you don't change."
Any other car of Glimmer's supposed stature would have simply dismissed Carl...if the 'R' word represented the single worst fear that Glimmer dreaded.
"Is...is this true? Will I really be..."
"Tonight you'll be visited by three ghosts, in the forms of people you know. It is now 9:00...each will visit on the hour starting at 10:00 as your alarm starts to beep...they will help you...so you don't end up like I did..."
"I hope I don't lose sleep over this."
"I was the one...who called the paramedics on you all those years ago..." Carl moved up so that he was nearly bumper-to-bumper with Glimmer, "...if you do not use this chance...you will never be able to sleep again..."
Although the prospect of being awake 24 hours a day might have actually pleased the Benz, there was something in the way Carl worded himself that caused Glimmer to simply park there, trembling, as Carl suddenly backed toward the window, through the glass and onto the balcony and appeared to just fall right off the drop.
Glimmer raced to the window and looked out of the balcony. The sky was clear save for a few clouds that the moon reflected off of in strips of silvery light.
Then he looked down.
The emptying streets seemed to have turned into rivers of what appeared to be wrecks of cars flowing seamlessly across the blackened concrete. None of the traffic below seemed to notice, let alone care about the ghosts that swarmed about them. He could spot Carl falling toward them...and disappearing into the white flow.
Glimmer backed away with tonight's fright already lodged into his system. He took another swig of the Valvoline and parked himself before hastily shutting his eyes.
He wanted to forget what just happened tonight...but he wasn't going to forget what was about to happen to him.
To be continued...
The following is a work of fanfiction inspired and based upon A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens using characters and events from the Cars movie by Disney and Pixar. Carl Magnus is a Cars-style character based off the BMW M3 GTR from EA's Need For Speed Series. Character concepts otherwise are based off their respective creators.
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...in Crime News tonight, a Chrysmas gift for justice today as the body of one of the West Coast's most notorious street racers was recovered from the bottom of the Carbon Canyons today, confirming the crushing end of his reign of terror.
Carl Magnus, who went by the street name Mag Three, was reported to have fallen off the Canyons after he was spun out and crashed through a safety barrier at the edge of the road during a high-speed police chase some nights ago. His body was identified through police records and tire track ballistics. Several Palmont police cruisers were also injured during the perilous chase through narrow canyon roads, but Magnus was the only one reported to have fallen off the cliffs.
A press conference is expected soon.
"Mr. McFierson?"
The red Pontiac Fiero quickly switched off the TV he was watching and quickly aligned to attention inside the pit garage, almost dislodging his yellow-and-black team cap. He didn't seem to mind that he was the only one in that cold garage that night on the speedway, apart from his team's star racer.
Jens Glimmer had already won the Piston Cup for the previous season, beating an array of competition that included "shooters" (cars mixed of so many makes that it was hard to tell exactly what they were), established Piston Cup figures and even other foreigners. This German racer was also particularly known for an ice-cold demeanor which made the rest of the room seem like a warm spring, and this Chrysmas Eve, he was no warmer than he usually was.
"Have you finished processing the data, McFierson?"
"Y-yes, sir. I've already sent it out and the evaluation should come back ASAP."
"Good. I'd like you here at 0600 to have my settings prepared."
"Sir...I was about to ask you something on that..."
"Well, spit it out then. Time wasted means victory made more elusive."
"I was wondering if I could have the day off."
The question hit Glimmer like a slippery fish.
"Excuse me?"
"If it's okay with you...and your managers."
For the past few years, Glimmer had been managed by a group literally referred to as the Managers. He knew little of their inner workings, especially since he was satisfied with their assistance in helping him win. It was assistance that got him four DTM championships before "exporting" himself to America to truly go international.
"Fahrvergnugen. I don't understand why people take as much as weekends off, especially racing teams. No, you cannot have the day off."
"Sir, it's Chrysmas!"
"I understand your family situation is serious, but your next vacation is not until New Year's Day."
"Just one day off. I'll work overtime as much as it takes to make up for it!"
It was then that Glimmer's in-car phone rang. He gestured for Rafey to silence himself (an order the Fiero followed like a puppy) as he took the call from his Managers. Rafey watched as his anger turned slowly to a slight sense of shock.
"Yes...ugh...all right then." Glimmer shut off the receiver before turning to Rafey.
"All right," he began with an exasperated sigh. "You can go spend Chrysmas with your family. I'll book the ticket for the next flight out. But I expect to see you back here early on the 26th."
"Only a day visit?"
"You were expecting a week? Now get to the airport before I change my mind."
"Y-y-yes sir. Merry Chrysmas."
Glimmer snapped a quick "Fahrvergnugen!" as Rafey left, leaving the cold Mercedes-Benz Piston Cup racer under cold fluorescent light in an even colder garage. He looked out at the track, which was only lit because he was present. His driver had already left for Chrysmas Vacation, leaving him to drive slowly out of the garage and out onto city streets. Glimmer's pacing was slow as he was still wearing his racing treads, and he'd have to do so all the way back to the hotel he was booked at.
Evening was settling on the city, and the hustle and bustle was evident. Cars shuffling to and fro on their lanes to get back to their garages of residence for Chrysmas Eve dinners and parties with family and friends. Were it not for the straight fascia and lack of such plans, Glimmer would have appeared to be just another one of the crowd.
The only real standout for a few blocks, it seemed, was the Salvation Army APC that caught his attention at the front door of the hotel.
"Salvation Army, sir..."
"I can see that, isn't hard for anyone to see that badge on your bulk."
"Sorry, I'm a bit clumsy sometimes..." the APC said as it slowly turned to face the clearly-smaller Mercedes-Benz. "Anyway..." he cleared his throat, as if he had a hard time memorizing what he was going to read, "There are thousands of cars in this city who need garages and anti-freeze this Chrysmas, and we need-"
Glimmer felt the need to interject.
"Don't you already have several installations in this city alone for that?"
"Well yeah...but to be honest, they're barely managing to feed them. Times have been hard with the economy, so we're also asking for donations.
"Well, I already have to donate quite a bit of my earnings to several charities as my contract dictates. Better there than jail...which is where a lot of them will end up anyway."
"Most cars would rather die than go to the country impound!"
The mention of death caused Glimmer to glare...something he only reserved for competition. "Then perhaps they ought to die. Every make has its lemons and surplus manufacture. You have a good evening."
The APC simply rolled back aghast at Glimmer's words, as Glimmer entered the hotel. It was a posh, 5-star place where he'd made reservations weeks in advance, but he had little need for any more than a standard garage there. The only reason he'd checked in there was becuase he had a reputation to keep up.
"Room 616, Mister Glimmer," the concierge replied before sliding Glimmer's keycard over to him. "Merry Christmas!" he added as Glimmer went into the elevator...before the Benz once again retorted, "Fahrvergnugen!"
There was something off about the door to his room that particularly startled him. Instead of the usual number in faux-metal ornaments, there was a BMW badge dripping with oil, as if it were welded onto someone and then ripped right off. In fact, the logo also appeared to have some of that sheet metal surrounding it too when it was ripped off.
Glimmer gasped and shook his frontside, only to find the normal number where the logo was. He quickly looked to either side down the hall to see if anyone had caught him...but it was quiet.
"I suppose all this practice is finally getting to me," he shrugged. "I'm not a robot."
He entered the room and set the key in the power slot before locking the door firmly shut beside him and heading into the bathroom for a quick wash and a change of tires. The drive here had left him filthy, by his standards. He switched on the shower...
...only to be doused by used oil. Glimmer reflexively squinted and gagged, trying to purge the oil from his mouth...but when he opened his eyes, it turned out to be just the cold shower water.
"What the heck is happening to me!?" he shouted, before taking a few deep breaths. "It's okay...just calm down. I must not be used to not practicing...that's all."
He finished his shower quickly and dried off before heading back to the bedroom, where he noticed a complimentary bottle of Valvoline on the minibar. He blinked and shook his frontside again, just in case a poison bottle replaced it. Thankfully, it didn't...and Glimmer slowly took it and took a quick swig. He forced it to go down into his system...Valvoline just didn't have that tang that he enjoyed from Mobil...before he put it back on the bar and turned off the light.
As soon as darkness engulfed him...
"Hello Jens...do you remember me?" came a haunting rasp from behind him.
Glimmer did a double-take, and at that moment wished he hadn't, otherwise his breath would not have suddenly left him.
A BMW M3 GTR had manifested in his hotel room, as ghastly white as a zombie. Or at least whatever wasn't covered with oil or showed exposed sheet metal or any of the other fragments of street fixtures sticking out of his body. The moonlight coming through the window seemed to emphasize the disfigurements all the more.
"Oh God...who are you?" It wasn't particularly surprising that the ice-cold Benz was still more cold than fearful.
"Glimmer...remember me?"
"I don't. This American Valvoline must've gone stale already."
"Why don't you ask me then?"
"All right then, who are you?"
"I was there when your life changed forever...in Hockenheim."
The Mercedes raised an eye-visor. "Hockenheim? That was more than a decade ago!"
"I was in the back of the pack that ran you into that barrier. And you might have heard of me on the news."
Glimmer flinched at the memory, but only briefly.
"Well then, Mr. Magnus, living well is the best revenge...and by the looks of you, it's revenge well wrought."
It was then that Carl groaned...or rather, roared...in a manner that his bumper seemed to fall right off. The BMW then bobbed his frontside to re-attach it.
"That's right, you suffer for what you did to me."
"But do you know what happened to me after I saw you crash, Jens?" Carl moaned. "I'd always wanted to race in the streets. Not caring for anyone but my closest crew-mates. And not really caring about them except for when I needed parts. My parents groomed me to be a legit touring car...and when I saw you crash I figured the legit circuit was no less harsh than the streets. How wrong I was."
"You had only watched a little loser get run out of the game of survival of the fittest...or at least for a while. Perhaps if you had persevered, I might have raced you in the DTM. What a rival you would have been...so many fans, so much bounty to divide-"
Carl roared out in pain again at the word "bounty", causing the entire room to rumble...and his bumper to fall off yet again.
"Bounty...awards, trophies, fans...is that all you care about!?"
"You sound as if you regret it."
"Regret? I've run dozens of cops and regular traffic cars off of the road...buried them in obstacles, mutilated them at roadblocks...but I never looked back. Not because I was being chased, but because I never cared to wonder what would happen to their families. The suffering they had to go through as I maimed or even killed their relatives."
"Leave them behind, Carl. They lost in your great race of life. Perhaps you're in this state simply because of the unfortunate manner of your demise..."
"And do you know what YOUR true state is really like, Jens? Do you really want to wait until you die to know?"
"I think I have a good idea already. You really mustn't be so pessimistic."
Another roar, and yet it seemed Glimmer hadn't quite gotten used to it. On the contrary, his demeanor seemed to have melted, and he moved in close to try to console the Bimmer.
"When you're finished doing what you do in life, you will never have a reason to see hope. You think you'll pass on in your prim and proper racer's form...but you've never seen your true inner self. My living form perished with me at the bottom of that canyon...but yours is still alive. You left it in the now-abandoned stretches at Hockenheim, mangled and rusting, whimpering, just begging to die."
"But I'm not dead...I'm living right now! I can show you how I feel pain if you want!"
"No...earthly pain no longer concerns me. I'll be feeling this pain for all eternity, burdened by the memories of those that choose not to forgive me...but your burden...is already worse than mine."
" But you died a winner at something, Carl."
"Winning? Is that all you ever think about? That's all I ever thought about...and look where I ended up..."
"Enemies come and go, but winners' legacies remain!" Glimmer pleaded, the anger slowly draining from his voice like an oil change.
"Yours won't remain when you pass on...you will be forgotten just like me...you will be replaced if you don't change."
Any other car of Glimmer's supposed stature would have simply dismissed Carl...if the 'R' word represented the single worst fear that Glimmer dreaded.
"Is...is this true? Will I really be..."
"Tonight you'll be visited by three ghosts, in the forms of people you know. It is now 9:00...each will visit on the hour starting at 10:00 as your alarm starts to beep...they will help you...so you don't end up like I did..."
"I hope I don't lose sleep over this."
"I was the one...who called the paramedics on you all those years ago..." Carl moved up so that he was nearly bumper-to-bumper with Glimmer, "...if you do not use this chance...you will never be able to sleep again..."
Although the prospect of being awake 24 hours a day might have actually pleased the Benz, there was something in the way Carl worded himself that caused Glimmer to simply park there, trembling, as Carl suddenly backed toward the window, through the glass and onto the balcony and appeared to just fall right off the drop.
Glimmer raced to the window and looked out of the balcony. The sky was clear save for a few clouds that the moon reflected off of in strips of silvery light.
Then he looked down.
The emptying streets seemed to have turned into rivers of what appeared to be wrecks of cars flowing seamlessly across the blackened concrete. None of the traffic below seemed to notice, let alone care about the ghosts that swarmed about them. He could spot Carl falling toward them...and disappearing into the white flow.
Glimmer backed away with tonight's fright already lodged into his system. He took another swig of the Valvoline and parked himself before hastily shutting his eyes.
He wanted to forget what just happened tonight...but he wasn't going to forget what was about to happen to him.
To be continued...