Swept Away: Critical Misdirection

[elizar]

Critical Misdirection. Mature.

Got the idea today, wrote in about one and half hour sitting, screened, edited and posted. This story has heavy sexual references so it is not directly posted here, but on DA with mature content filter. Most of you got DA so it isn't a problem.

IPD got to see it first to get approval to post it publically.

Aron and Adam copyrighted to me.
Phoenix and Grayston copyrighted to IPD.
Ronald and Lazaro copyrighted to Eva.

[Evangeline]

Wow, pretty intense stuff. Adam needs some serious smacking.

[elizar]

Everything to divert the attention from him. And you can't make an unconscious man confess.

There was a slightly different version of this where Adam was actually a user, but I reverted back to just very manipulative person.

And yes, he deserves serious smacking.