Post by Nitrohoney on Nov 30, 2006 18:54:46 GMT -5
I have no clue why I'm writing this, but, It's about Doc's long-lost daughter, adopted daughter, really... This is my first Doc fanfic, so have pity on me.
Rating: PG
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The warm sun shown inbetween the leaves that shaded a geodesic dome.
Sitting under that tree was a a green VW bus named Fillmore, and he was meditating quietly.
"Hum... Hum..." He hummed, shifting back and forth.
Then an Army Jeep pulled up next to him and chuckled quietly. "Fillmore... This is your mind..." He teased, waving a tire in front of the bus.
"Hello, Mind." Fillmore said back.
"I want you to smack yourself really haaard..." the Jeep continued.
Fillmore's bottom lip hid under his top lip as he slowly raised a tire and began to hit himself.
"HEY FILLMORE!!!" A voice interrupted him.
Fillmore's eyes opened slowly as he turned to his left. Seeing the Jeep and a shiny red racecar.
"Oh, hey, Sarge... I was talking to my mind." He said, looking at the Jeep, who's name was probably Sarge.
"Suurre you were, Hippy. Suuure ya were." Sarge answered, his voice gruff.
The racecar (Lighting McQueen by name) rushed up to the pair, his suspension bouncing like a rabbit. "You are so not gonna believe this, but, Doc said that--" He stopped short by a loud engine nearing closer.
The three turned around and looked down the road; a red metal-flake colored 1991 Chevy Corvette was driving along the road, her chrome rims shining in the light.
She pulled into a stall at Flo's V8 cafe and and looked around. "This looks like it..." She said, scuffing a tire in the dirt. "Now I just gotta find him."
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Well, I think it's obvious who Doc's daughter is... I couldn't think of anything other than a Corvette, even though Hudson is owned by Chrysler. Please tell me if it's any good so far!
Rating: PG
~~~~~
The warm sun shown inbetween the leaves that shaded a geodesic dome.
Sitting under that tree was a a green VW bus named Fillmore, and he was meditating quietly.
"Hum... Hum..." He hummed, shifting back and forth.
Then an Army Jeep pulled up next to him and chuckled quietly. "Fillmore... This is your mind..." He teased, waving a tire in front of the bus.
"Hello, Mind." Fillmore said back.
"I want you to smack yourself really haaard..." the Jeep continued.
Fillmore's bottom lip hid under his top lip as he slowly raised a tire and began to hit himself.
"HEY FILLMORE!!!" A voice interrupted him.
Fillmore's eyes opened slowly as he turned to his left. Seeing the Jeep and a shiny red racecar.
"Oh, hey, Sarge... I was talking to my mind." He said, looking at the Jeep, who's name was probably Sarge.
"Suurre you were, Hippy. Suuure ya were." Sarge answered, his voice gruff.
The racecar (Lighting McQueen by name) rushed up to the pair, his suspension bouncing like a rabbit. "You are so not gonna believe this, but, Doc said that--" He stopped short by a loud engine nearing closer.
The three turned around and looked down the road; a red metal-flake colored 1991 Chevy Corvette was driving along the road, her chrome rims shining in the light.
She pulled into a stall at Flo's V8 cafe and and looked around. "This looks like it..." She said, scuffing a tire in the dirt. "Now I just gotta find him."
~~~~~
Well, I think it's obvious who Doc's daughter is... I couldn't think of anything other than a Corvette, even though Hudson is owned by Chrysler. Please tell me if it's any good so far!